Add FO Council proposed edits (#84)

nigelmegitt · web-flow · commit 981231724cab · 2022-12-08T16:25:45.000Z
* Add FO Council proposed edits

* Change MAY to may in example

* Remove "producing" from "content implementation"
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -298,13 +298,15 @@ <h3>Requirements for advancing the maturity level of features</h3>
     its implementability has been demonstrated.</p>
     <p>When considering suitability to advance any feature beyond
     Candidate Recommendation, at least two independent factors of verification
-    MUST be demonstrated, which may come from any of:</p>
+    for each normative requirement
+    MUST be demonstrated, which may come, as relevant for that requirement,
+    from any of:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>Presentation implementation</li>
-      <li>Content</li>
+      <li>Content implementation</li>
       <li>Validating implementation</li>
     </ul>
-    <p>For example, a feature MAY be advanced beyond Candidate Recommendation
+    <p>For example, a feature may be advanced beyond Candidate Recommendation
     if it has been demonstrated to be implementable on the basis of an
     open source implementation that successfully processes content from an
     independent implementation.</p>
